Sedated Heart

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    • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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    Sedated Heart



    Will you call my name again, my love
    Oh lonely tune echoes evermore
    I have waited long, alone, this single dove
    Never your face can I adore

    Waiting for you on the banks of before
    For two long years I have waited
    To hear you call my name once more
    My heart now forever sedated

    Take my hand my love, to that distant shore
    Sweet solemn tune lingers, like times thinning threads
    Your eyes I still see ever blue, was their lure
    I have waited long, long my love, to rest my head

    On the banks of life's distant shore
    Never more, never more, will it be
    Our love in it's mortal form, you swore
    How many more years must I wait, set my heart free

    Forever my living heart sedated

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    lunamarie commented on Sedated Heart

    01-17-2011

    ohh Asha ... how sweet a poem ... can there be a sweeter poem?? ... ohh Asha ... Congratulations ... the judges were so right ...............**Luna

    ApaqRasgirl

    01/18/2011

    oh thank you so much sweet luna for that wonderful comment. I am glad you liked it and thanks for the congrats.......love asha

    jyothi commented on Sedated Heart

    12-24-2010

    Con grates on win. You made----------------------------------- my heart sedated.

    ApaqRasgirl

    12/25/2010

    thank you dear so very much, sorry to take so long replying as I just got out of the hospital yesterday and I am moving very slow...........thanks so very much.........Namaste love asha

    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Sedated Heart

    12-23-2010

    Congratulations on your win. I am definitely keeping you in my prayers. I love this poem. A well deserved win...............E

    ApaqRasgirl

    12/25/2010

    thank you so much my sweet friend. I am still stunned with the win but am so happy to be out of the hospital and home for christmas. MERRY CHRISTMAS TO YOU AND YOURS ......love asha

    cousinsoren commented on Sedated Heart

    12-23-2010

    CONGRATULATIONS , Dear Asha, My heart is still overflowing with joy and pride that you won.

    ApaqRasgirl

    12/23/2010

    Omg..I cant believe I won, I am in tears with this news.......I wish I was home with all of you but I am still stuck in hospital............thank you my sweet oren............love and miss you all..........asha

    HIP13044b commented on Sedated Heart

    12-23-2010

    Congratulations on a well deserved win! I really enjoyed reading this.

    ApaqRasgirl

    12/23/2010

    thank you so very much, I am in shock with this.......still in hospital and just now able to turn on laptop after pain meds eased it off some.........thank you I am so glad you enjoyed.........love asha

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