seeing double 7-28-09

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    this was written originally as two poems together
    one line was written 2 spaces were added and more was later added.

    then in between a second was written, opposite of the words already placed...and then both were put together...first time i had written somethign like this...so not sure where the influence came from.

    but i will say the inspiration was from a woman...

    seeing double 7-28-09

     

    setting there across the room,
    gazing upon your body whole
    to smell the fragrance of your hair
    every curve i wanted to know

    to look into the deepness of your eyes
    to look upon your body with full intent
    your mind and body no longer in disguise
    my mind, your body, the image sent

    your eyes with tears, so full of sorrow
    the soul which reached unto tomorrow
    to remove the pain i wish to borrow
    so you deal with only happiness

    to take it as my own and lock it away
    and knowing whats its like with soft caress
    so that it cannot attack being at bay
    being in your arms i truly miss.

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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