Separation

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  • dustydai
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Separation

One day you were here,
I love you so
you loved me too,
always let me know.

Poison from your past
took you away,
Now I'm missing you
every day,
SEPARATION

What we had
most people don't find,
many seek,
life is unkind.

Tears like a river,
from my eyes did flow,
I felt my heart stop
when they laid you low.
SEPARATION

Now I'm alone,
learn to cope,
for a while I
took solace
in my love for dope.
SEPARATION.

Ten years your gone,
almost eleven,
life with you
was almost heaven.
SEPARATION

No more dope,
tears still fall,
I've learned to
survive it all.

I dream of you,
I see your face,
my time will come,
I know it's true,
I wonder if
I'll be with you.

I only hope
we do not have
an eternity of
SEPARATION

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devaamido commented on Separation

09-17-2009

Your poetry speaks right from the heart & into the heart chakra of your readers. I have to rate this s 10.

indiancowboy91 commented on Separation

09-12-2009

Not bad. You have talent, for sure. Would you read my poem "A Thought" and leave a comment. Thank you...

dustydai

09/13/2009

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, and thank you so much for allowing me to read y ours, I think it's a wonderful write and you are definitely talented as far as writing goes. I love your photo, is that you? It's a beautiful photo. I live in Northern New Mexico, and I've never really been anywhere else, but I enjoy meeting and getting to know people from other states and countries. I sent you a friend request, I hope you'll accept it.

SaintStoney commented on Separation

08-13-2009

I reallly enjoyed readin this, I am sorry for the pain and loss that you have had to endure, But I am willing to bet, a love like yours cannot be seprated forever.

bluewolf commented on Separation

08-12-2009

This comment is in order that I can rate your poem as I did not do so before.

bluewolf commented on Separation

08-12-2009

I must say that I find you to be very impressive as a poet; your wording and debth of emotional meaning hidden in each stanza worthy of a 10 rating.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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