Seperate ways

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    • Finding my wings. Be they of feather or leather, I shall wear them with pride, for they are my own..

    Seperate ways
    What is a man supposed to do,
    when his heart is shredded through?
    Fight for a prize he shall never win,
    or walk away and face being condemned?

    What do I have to do or say,
    to lift your eyes, make you look my way?
    And how do I make myself let you go,
    to live your life, and learn all you will know?

    Vision becomes so blurred, storm surges are starry,
    all my stuttering, and I cant find any words better than "I'm sorry".
    So what is a man to do during the days,
    his heart and soul take thier seperate ways?

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    NitaBoo commented on Seperate ways

    02-09-2011

    I love this! Excellent thought put into this and a fabulous query it presents to the readers mind...
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    simoneaugustus commented on Seperate ways

    03-06-2010

    The last line made me want to weep! I have several of your poems listed as my favorites, but I think I love this one the most. So poignant, emotional, achingly beautiful. You are truly talented!
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    randa commented on Seperate ways

    04-02-2009

    this really touch my heart feel like me
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    caspiancri commented on Seperate ways

    03-16-2009

    nice flow
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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