seraph seduction

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    This was a recent dream experience. Some would say it was just a fantasy for me. I truly felt that I experienced heavenly sex with an angel. By the way, the angel was neither a male nor a female, but encompassed both genders. I have been away for a while, so busy with the coming of Radiant Spring! Thanks for reading on my page-Enjoy!

    seraph seduction
    hoisted high on heaven’s vault

    my soul was drawn, beyond exalt

    platinum velvet skin, liquid light

    love energy in otherworldly flight

     

    embraced was I, with powerful wings

    instant knowledge imparted, on myriads of things

    eons of mysteries telepathically spoken

    memories, promises, protected, unbroken

     

    all blinding darkness fell away

    in pure radiance, ecstasy was displayed

    harmonious balance, all beauty in accord

    my trust in natural unity, restored

     

    complete, absolute, sheer, translucent

    genuine, innocent, glorious, unobtrusive

    and gently was I returned to earth

    upon my pillow, not a hair, save my soul, was stirred

     

    to awaken at dawn, seeming from a dream

    changed forever by a seraph’s fantasy

     

    -M. Jacobs

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    Maxsbabyforever commented on seraph seduction

    12-01-2010

    Oh my gosh.... amazing. you did such a good job! Add me! i have the same kind of poetry, Dark, Fantasy and chilling, i just haven't posted it yet.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2010

    Glad you liked it. Thanks for tuning in and responding to it. Many thanks!! ;-)

    alreedus commented on seraph seduction

    12-01-2010

    If I could be such a seraph, I would crawl unknowlingly about you, sucking splendor from pores and crevices that emanate light, colors, the smell of the poppy and try with all my might to refrain from shouting delight.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2010

    Thanks for reading the poem, and your interesting commentary. Smiles!

    MarionYost commented on seraph seduction

    11-21-2010

    great flow, good imagery. interesting poem . All the best -Marion-
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    danmartyjake1

    11/22/2010

    Thanks for your support. Glad you enjoyed it. Great to hear from you. ;-)

    Marsink commented on seraph seduction

    09-20-2010

    Read it again and enjoyed as much or more so than the first! To capture a dream framed in fine word-art is a desireable skill, and the visons from paradisical phrases set one's mind at heavens gate! Applause building!
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    danmartyjake1

    09/20/2010

    A Joyous Thank You to You for coming back and your opinion matters to me. Many thanks. ;-)

    Chaos128 commented on seraph seduction

    08-02-2010

    Ha ha when you've seen the best, you won't settle for less! A vivid description of a transcendent vision.
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    danmartyjake1

    09/13/2010

    It seems that for me, this is the ultimate encounter! I appreciate your thoughts.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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