serching for somthing new

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serching for somthing new

serching for somthing new

to whisper in the wind my hear  calls for you  serching for somthing new  when you call my name i shall follow  the wind that blows upon my skin  dreding from what i might  find  looking to the sky serching for a way to fly deep with in your arms
to hold you close is to pull you  ever so near  my heart knows  you are near
 to hold you close is to pull you  ever so near  my heart knows  you are near
 when my eyes release that final tears of pain my heart  follows the call the one that answers my call i know you are ever so diffrent most of all
 for when our heart meet they skip a beat  until our final song comes along ever so strong i know you are ever so near i know it isnt so far from the rage i feel  yes my darling  it will not be so long just give the sands of time my all before i see the last sand  grain fallsour hearts will know it all 
bear: when my eyes release that final tears of pain my heart  follows the call the one that answers my call i know you are ever so diffrent most of all
bear: for when our heart meet they skip a beat  until our final song comes along ever so strong
bear: i know you are ever so near i know it isnt so far from the rage i feel  yes my darling  it will not be so long

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latinangel commented on serching for somthing new

07-12-2009

I like what you have to say here. It is very emotional but maybe you could cut out some of the repeated words to make it flow a little better. Latin Angel

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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