Seriously?

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    Seriously?
    He likes me.
    I like him.
    You wanna catch an attitude?
    And I’m supposed to give a damn?!
    HA!
    !You’re so funny
    That sense of humor was once cute.
    But then I saw past your perfect veneer
    And saw the real you
    You abused me…
    Used me…
    Now, you wanna tell me you still love me?!
    Nigga, please!!!
    You amuse me!
    And the saddest part is
    Is that you’re oh so serious
    When it comes to my love life,
    You’re oh so curious
    And you’re friend can love me better
    Now, you’re oh so furious…
    And you think I give a fuck!?
    Oh, you’re oh so delirious!
    Check this…
    You were the first nigga to lay me to bed
    Except it was a damn floor.
    Little did I know at that naïve age
    You treated me little better than a whore.
    Now your heart’s sore
    Because I don’t love you anymore
    And the fact that u think I give 2 fine fucks
    Irks me to the core!
    And one virginity,
    seven girls and too many chances later
    You getting mad because like Usher
    I’m signing them papers!
    You see
    You’ve watched your friend get what you had
    And you see he handles me better
    So now you wanna get mad?
    I see your pool of emotions
    I see you swimming in what you’re dealing
    Unfortunately for you
    You look up and there’s a ceiling.
    So a word of advice
    Ain’t shit worth concealing
    You lost
    He won
    Now, get the fuck out ya feelings!

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    Chaos128 commented on Seriously?

    06-27-2010

    Ha ha sounds like a message that's been delivered to me a time or two, but never with this keen an edge. I'll be sure whenever I comment on your work to be on my BEST behavior ha ha
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    tonia18 commented on Seriously?

    06-16-2010

    i like this one ive been there and done that my ex used me and lied to me
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    cheronld commented on Seriously?

    05-07-2010

    DAMN DAMN DAMN.....wow this is the shiiiiiitttttt....I absolutely loved the emotions that came off the paper in this....I know I have wanted to say something like this in my youth.....great writing girl don't stop...you obviously have alot to say....andI for one can't wait to read it...
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    Knwldge commented on Seriously?

    12-22-2009

    i likes this one, i feel you,fa real, i've dealt with alot of bullshit from females, and as soon as they see u wit something thats real they wanna try to swoop in and reclaim what was once their's or so what they thought was theirs, yo lil mama keep it 100
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    MsHangtime

    12/23/2009

    Aw. Thanks. I'm glad you like the poem, but I wish you hadn't been able to relate to it. I hate the drama that comes with relationships. Ugh. irksome! Thanks again!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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