Set me Free.......

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Have anybody ever been trapped in a situation that they want to, but for some physical or mental reason they can't get out of ???

Set me Free.......

 

How can I trust you,

When I just realized that I don’t even know you

For years I followed where you led,

In hopes that I could eventually control you.

But now I must resist,

Because we both can’t exist,

In the same space or the same shape,

At the same time.

Because the truth is,

I must admit,

I’m becoming ambiguous.

And it’s beginning to seriously affect my mental state of mind.

Now I know that you were designed,

Programmed to seek and find.

The secrets that life keeps hidden.

But I refuse to fly blind,

Ignoring God’s symbols and signs.

And keep foolishly pursuing things that he has strictly forbidden.

So Good ridden,

Because this ain’t living.

I would rather be without you,

Then to keep submitting to your impulsive decisions.

Consequences and bad business,

Is all that I’ve received.

Allowing you to focus my attention,

On the things others have achieved.

So if you truly want what is best,

You’ll forget about me.

And release me from your unbreakable bond.

And set me free.

Haki “The HottestNewPoet” Natuwah

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Karma885 commented on Set me Free.......

11-07-2009

YA SOME TIMES ITS OK TO LET GO AND MOVE FOWARD. AND GET OUT OF THAT HOLD ALL U WANT IS TO BE FREE... COMMENT BACK ON MY POEMS

HakiNatuwah1

12/04/2009

thanks for taking the time to SET ME FREE...I have read an commented on your poems...Is there a particular poem that I should read??? One that illustrates who you are and how you think???

jademelissa74 commented on Set me Free.......

10-26-2009

A powerful, free-spirited piece. This was a brilliant write. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

HakiNatuwah1

11/01/2009

Thank you...I try to take my readers on a journey with me...so when I asked to be set free...I was asking on the behalf of everyone who read this piece and is trapped in a similar situation...sometimes you have to realize and accept that you are simply not in control...once you do then you can sincerely begin pray to God that He delivers you from that situation...thank you again jade and why stop here...do you dare to LOOK any further In2 my Soul...^_^..

JamilahAyanna commented on Set me Free.......

10-23-2009

Set u free? How could u eva ask such a task 4rm me, if thou wishes to be free u'd have a betta chance of killin me, but believe my spirit would forever haunt your soul, so when u thought u got away u'd still be within my control, bein free in your situation is juz a state of mind, which makes you numb in the eyes potentially makin you blind to the fact u cant escape the place I've made 4 you, and it must be hard 4 u to evade the truth, but nevertheless if freedom is wut ya heart desires, rememba with each step you walk away from me anotha day of ya lyfe expires.....

JamilahAyanna

10/26/2009

Yah I did juz cuz I thought ya poem wuz real hot....

HakiNatuwah1

10/24/2009

wow...did you just write that??? If you did then you are ready to perform in a Poetry Slam...wow

JamilahAyanna commented on Set me Free.......

10-23-2009

Omg lyke I hope erybody else sees wut I see wheneva u write cuz if they dnt then its clear dat they're blind and if not dat then maybe they dnt have tyme 2 find da words for a lyrical art as devine as this, it wuz beautiful and I hope my compliments are suitable for a poem written wit such grace, and it would be a discrace had u of let ur wonderful talent go 2 waste, dont cease to write cuz ya talent is above and beyond top flight filled wit so much incite which surely excites and ignites sumthin within me 2 wanna read more.........I loved it...

HakiNatuwah1

10/24/2009

So do you think that you are ready for "Mind Sexxx" ^_^

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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