Set You Free

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  • Devotion

    Set You Free

    It pains me to see your confusion.
    Unknown is the amount of tears shed.
    Yet note, my love, that I WILL travel,
    Through hell, and the land of the dead.
    To ensure the sanity and the safety,
    In a heart and soul, so young is thee.
    Wiping away the tears is possible,
    Replenishing your mind, to set you free.
    I strive to ease your trials,and to God I plea.
    Only I hope that I am, that companion you need.
    Dependent and amazing, you have been to me,
    A debt I owe, and to repay is my creed.
    Tears will blur our vision, in darkness we cannot see.
    But one day, I swear, I WILL... set you free..

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    Copyright 2009, all rights reserved

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    joanlorraine commented on Set You Free

    02-14-2009

    Great. Still wondering if it's sincere in words or guilt. But, either way great work.

    stormimartin commented on Set You Free

    02-02-2009

    Very strong emotions I enjoyed this!

    deebo72 commented on Set You Free

    02-02-2009

    nice...this shows real devotion

    PunoAngulus commented on Set You Free

    02-02-2009

    I really enjoyed this poem that opens the heart and soul to show you what the author is feeling and what the experiences he went through. Strong pain and I know the reader could feel it. Beautiful.

    NayInLove commented on Set You Free

    02-02-2009

    wow!! very very good

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