seventeen (acrostic)

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seventeen years... happy anniversary a twist on acrostic ... i think it is more interesting this way...

seventeen (acrostic)

seventeen
years since
love showed its face
seveteen years of
loving embraced... for
seventeen years
i ve been dancing with fate... for
seventeen more

my destiny waits   

 

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BringMeBullets commented on seventeen (acrostic)

05-11-2010

Woah... Talk about amazing!! I love this so much. Your talent is unbelievable. I must say that you are FOR SURE one of the greatest poets on this site... If not the greatest. Amazing! Thank you for sharing.

Dano

05/11/2010

thank you... your compliments are humbling...

RyouUseful commented on seventeen (acrostic)

05-04-2010

A very different version of an acrostic poem. I absolutley love the twist that you put on this. Thank you for sharing. You never dissapoint us Dano. :)

Dano

05/04/2010

thank you for reading and commenting

KtIrish commented on seventeen (acrostic)

05-03-2010

That is SO cool! Great write and form. Totally on my favorites list....

Dano

05/04/2010

thank you so much

ginga commented on seventeen (acrostic)

05-03-2010

DAno, The uniqueness of this acrostic is exemplary. It takes planning and time to devise verse like this and make it sound poetic. Love it. ginga

Dano

05/04/2010

thank you so much ginga

susanismith commented on seventeen (acrostic)

05-01-2010

love how you incoorporated the word Seventeen in your poem, and how it reads out like a song...

Dano

05/01/2010

thanks for reading and commenting susan

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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