SevenTwentySevenTen

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    I wrote this the night my grandfather died.

    SevenTwentySevenTen

    The moon is full
    and incredible and bright.
    Tears fall down
    the left cheek, then the right.
    The beauty of the heavens
    is in sight.
    My grandfather
    just died tonight. 

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    stever commented on SevenTwentySevenTen

    03-28-2013

    sad but true ,,just another thing to make you bluebut it will all

    cheronld commented on SevenTwentySevenTen

    05-16-2012

    Short and sweet and it packed just enough of a punch to get the emotional feelings out....sorry for your loss...Cher

    xSONGBIRDx commented on SevenTwentySevenTen

    09-23-2011

    This poem is very sad, yet very beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

    shakeme4life commented on SevenTwentySevenTen

    07-11-2011

    I would like to see you enlargen this .. poem ... expand on the detail of the moment

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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