~shadow secrets~

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~shadow secrets~

shadows passing through trees and under brush, leaving and fleeing in a hurried rush.in the moons silver glow, the shadows only know the secrets of the night. the shadows are the secrets,their eyes shining with evil light,licking their lips and snapping their jaws in sickening delight. their padded feet against the floor, dancing and prancing in blood galore.

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Phoenix9 commented on ~shadow secrets~

10-06-2009

wow excellent write , nice and dark in the unknown

bforibus commented on ~shadow secrets~

05-28-2009

i love it for the flow and the darkness. it has an essence of unknown and it allows me to guess. very good write

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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