shadows calling

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shadows calling

I can feel it all around me…

Every direction, as it’s calling…

It’s so dark that I can see

All the dangers that are falling

Not a chance of ever fearing

As my shadows, reappearing

Lurking darkness, I am hearing

Subtle whispers, yes they’re nearing

In the corners, shapes are shifting

My interest caught a sudden spark

As my spirits, slowly lifting

I’m not alone in the dark

In the darkness I am staring

And this evil I am pairing

Much in common, we are sharing

Lack of love and of caring

At peace at last, I feel they’re home

I lay to rest , my mind’s so deep

In this darkness as they roam

Comforting me as I sleep.

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raziel69 commented on shadows calling

08-22-2009

this is great, very vivid images abound as you let the words pour across your mind, good work, my dear, 10 from me.

photochick commented on shadows calling

08-20-2009

short but so much in it great job grand imagery look forward to reading more your talent shines with in this poem keep on writing

lostangryyouth commented on shadows calling

08-12-2009

i love what i'm reading and i love the pictures it forms in my head!!! AWESOME!!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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