Shadows

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    Shadows

    SHADOWS

    I can feel it all around you...
    I can see it in your eyes...
    You feel so scared and all alone...
    And people can be so unkind...
    Even a loyal friend seems hard to find....
    The only sky you see is dark and grey....
    As if the world is growing colder...
    And shadows seem to darken your dayz...
    If you should jump away from it all...
    I'll be there to break your fall...
    And into the night we'll fly away...
    Shadows have fallen upon your door...
    With so many monsters inside your head....
    Spilling across the floor and onto your bed...
    Just give me a moment please....
    Because I can mend a broken heart....
    And once again your soul will shine...
    Chaseing all those shadows away.....          by Bryan/copyright material

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    xborntobeweirdx commented on Shadows

    02-26-2010

    Very nice, I love this, so much emotion and alot of ppl could prolly relate to this. Kudos to you! 10 from me!
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    Kukia

    02/26/2010

    Arigoto gozaimasu(TY very much)That's a very nice compliment.

    sammia commented on Shadows

    07-30-2009

    wow this is amazing i dont think i have ever read any of your poems before. You had me waiting for the next line. This is so powerful and deep I love it. I will also be adding it to my favorites. 10 from me
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    Kukia

    07/30/2009

    Sammia sama,I am the one whos blessed that you took the time and reah it.After reading ur's,I just knew you needed to read this one.I'm honoured that thx.I't brings great joy that someone will take away from it thats thier very own.

    kittman101 commented on Shadows

    07-01-2009

    this is truly something special. I love the emotion you out behind it when it was written. I can almost see the tears in your eyes. aand the images in your mind. truly a piece of art. keep it up
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    SilverGirl commented on Shadows

    05-31-2009

    Bryan.. I love your style.. whats more.. you and I think very much alike.. I believe we take the same outlook on many things... You are a rare man.. and I am happy to know you dear one.. Silver Girl
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    Kukia

    05/31/2009

    s much blessd,I feel...such god friends,freakin awwsme!

    papertears commented on Shadows

    05-31-2009

    Oh my goshhh~I really love this one! It seems like you wrote this for me~like you have met my monsters and tried to chase them away before I got here! Thank you! lol
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    Kukia

    05/31/2009

    Just 4 yu my dear

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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