Shaken, Not Stirred...
Sometimes I feel like a bottle of soda.
Shaken up. Pressure building inside.
Ready to explode.
But with the cap on. There's no outlet.
No way to relieve it.
So the bubbles & fizz stay there,
Ready to burst out at any minute
But no one wants to open the bottle, naturally.
So the fizz dies down within itself.
'Til there's nothing left but flat soda.
No bubbles.
Then the soda is shot & you might as well throw it away.
I know that must sound crazy.
But I never said I wasn't.
DarkChi commented on Shaken, Not Stirred...
11-18-2009
Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.
Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.
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