Shapes

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  • Life
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  • Sadness
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  • Loss

    Shapes

    Hectic Shapes
    Purple like grapes
    Triangle emotions
    Hectagon missions
    With adult decisions 
    I miss my circles
    When it was easy
    Now the days
    Are empty squares
    Soon the shapes
    Will slowly form
    The directions of our Lives... 

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    poeticmike commented on Shapes

    10-21-2012

    Such a strong gorgeous mind twirling piece here.. Very lovely and my your imagery of shapes within your words accompanied by how you conveyed your message deeply has the synapses of my brain firing rapidly..Im blown away.. Great job zorro....poeticmike

    windsongs

    10/21/2012

    Reminds me of the movie Apollo 13 and how it is virtually impossible to fit a square peg in a round hole! That"s life!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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