Shatter

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Im getting pent up anger out. I made an I hate you cake. It was fun. Yes I am a sick and twisted girl who enjoys breaking others as they have broken me, I will do on to others as they have to me.

Shatter

I can see te broken cracks,
I Look fine on the outside,
But the truth,
Im in over a millon of shattered peices,
You see my smile,
You take the bait and fall for my lie,
Yet Im still smiling,
Fake as can be,
Faker then a barbie,
For no one has saw the real mea,
Plauge by nightmares and insatity,
I Only let you see some of me,
The cold-hearted tempermental Me,
I am really shattered to peices,
For it took not long to shatter,
Nathen, Max, Tyler
May you do great at ruining lives,
Maybe you will find I got my payback,
I will shatter you,
Worse I will make sure i make your life living hell,
I will enjoy it,
In fact right now I hope your ready,
My once silent storm,
Im going to let rage,
And let it be heard,
I will break you down,
Your mind pick them apart past the point of return,
Shatter!
Shatter like glass,
I would warn you,
But im not that nice,
You will Pay,
And you will shatter,
Shatter!

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LadyLuck commented on Shatter

09-22-2010

Beautifully strong poem full. I'm sorry you were hurt. I must say my favorite line is "Fake as can be,/ Faker then a barbie,"It made me laugh because i never liked that doll. Well done. you may want to fix lines 1 & 10

nam1292 commented on Shatter

09-21-2010

ik wat u mean and how you feel u just need to find sum1 that will let u scream vent n cry and help u back together again

Rhymer commented on Shatter

09-19-2010

I know all to well how to wear a mask to hide the inner me raging to get out. Intriguing poem one that seeks revenge to sooth the angered beast within. 10

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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