Shattered Souls

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Shattered Souls

Love simply ain't for me
Could be the ugly exterior
everyone tends to see
I have my good days, and
also my bad
Seems just to get
dumped on
Maybe, the best day I could have
My approach to people seems
to only limit me
Because of the ugliness
people only tend to see
Neglected into a life that
shouldn't just be
Again of the ugliness that
people tend to see
Wish I could appease the lot
And be excepted for what I've got
But in these days, and in times
Guess that this is a long shot
More or less the ugliness is going
to make it all rot
But oh what of a beautiful interior
that people forgot

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ccslim commented on Shattered Souls

10-31-2009

Lol great write! Living a life knowing what is inside is what matters! The only thing that felt odd is line five but I know it has to be hidden in breath.

Niecy commented on Shattered Souls

02-22-2009

People in life sometimes makes you feel like this. Every once in a blue moon I'm wrought up in this cocoon. Inspired by a friend's pain my pen expressed her claim. I wrote... 'Accept Me' you read at your leisure. Although I believe love is for her! Keep writing what your soul speaks, so that your heart won't weep! :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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