She Cries In Pain


  • ApaqRasgirl
  • Back online after loosing internet for a long time. I am very happy to finally be back with all my friends and I hope to de writing and posting soon. Love Asha

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She Cries In Pain

Earth Is
Is anybody listening?

Tears are flowing with stains
Flooding down the Mountains

Through Streams & Rivers, past Lakes
To Valleys below. All the way, She Aches

To Her Majestic Oceans, Her tears are forever flowing
As she cries, all attempts futile, to wash grime away, knowing

What man has thrown out, his filthy trash, She cannot wash away
Clopping Her on the head, blacken Her eyes, break limbs, every day

Bruising Her precious delicate giving body,  that man thinks is elastic
Disposing his trash, that never rots, evil thing he created, called plastic

Mother is completely unable to digest, and he knows She cannot stretch
Her womb to hold anymore. She is sick, in pain, with what man did etch

From this Evil thing he has forced down Her throat, when he thinks he's
No use for it anymore. Just toss it out, into Her rivers and streams

It all goes, till it reaches Her Mighty Oceans blue, where it flows
Round and round inside Her belly, with no end in sight, it goes

Never digest, evil plastic churning in Her womb, unclaimed
She cries to show us how, we should be ashamed

Though we are unwilling to write it in stone.
This evil mankind has shown.
Dispoils his bountiful Home.
In the here & now write!
"Rapist of Nature" 

The Panthiest

Our Mother Is Fuming.....Watch Out

Written by

Accepted the challenge from poet friend & mentor
Here is your reply dear friend!!!
Is anybody else listening!!!

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JadedJezzabel commented on She Cries In Pain





thank you very much dear, I am thrilled you liked it........I also made that one into a video poem and it is in the forums under the topic plastic soup if you care to watch.........thanks love asha



heres the link to it on the second page of the forums.....just scroll down till yuo find asha

MarionYost commented on She Cries In Pain


NICELY done, great flow, spoken with such conviction. Very true to life, Great write. All the best. -Marion-



thank you dear for reading my poem and I am happy you liked it. I made a video poem of this one it is in the forums here on page two. thanks so much for the sweet asha

Springsize commented on She Cries In Pain


You have found a most impressive visual to accompany your heartwords ... and of course, the shape that you have used for your poem is refreshing and adds also, to the Mother Earth -- rounded, softened influence of she, who cradles us still... upon her magnetic rock... and your finale ~ is as stark as your poem in telling the plastic tale.. good rhymes, you used... Very Nice Work.... ok... who's in charge of the Eco Team T-Shirts... you have found incredible art.....



LOL, thank you dear for that sweet comment, I guess John is the one in charge of our little Earth 2.0 Poet Posse, come over to the forums and join us with one of your wonderful poems, and don't try to tell me you can't do it for I know how great your poems can do one about this mess as well......thanks for the read......loves ya asha heres the link to the group..........LOL

2poemsforu commented on She Cries In Pain


Asha, A fantastic poem that covers all the bases concerning Mother Earth being trashed. ginga



thank you dear for those heartfelt words, I am glad you liked it. I will have another very short but to the point one out in a few minutes. I am finishing the last bit of edit on a video poem that I pulled from this one, I think you will like it........thanks loves ya asha

Rhymer commented on She Cries In Pain


I enjoyed this read and the effort put into forming the words into a globe representing the earth. Excellent message against polution. I also enjoyed the pictures on your profile are these original works?



thank you dear for that sweet comment, and yes about the pictures some are original my photos some are from the net..........the question I was asking about them is that I could not decide on a picture to put with my winning poem so I thought I would leave it up to my friends to pick one for me. Pretty much all of those pictures our ones that I have taken, the beach, tree, my hubby playing in the creek, ones from cedar keys and the freaky moon light pictures are ones hubby took on top of clinch mountain TN before he died......the very last set of pictures I think there are nine or so are the ones I want my friends to pick one from for my winning poem....if you click on the picture to see a larger view it will show you a number, just give me the number and I will know which one you picked......oh and btw, if you would like to see more of my photography, I am a professional photographer of nature and wildlife, I freelance for NGM and F&S magazines, you can view them on my photo website at: ............I hope you enjoy them, if ya do please leave me a comment on any of the pages.......thanks so much loves ya asha

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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