SHE FINALLY FOUND HER REASON

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I have a daughter who has been batteling addiction for many years now, she has actually died in my arms once , and ems brought her back, she was in a coma for almost 2 months in a hospital for many months and bound to a wheel chair, she has overdosed multiple times ( too many to care to count), and all of this was not enough to make her stop. well now she is having a baby (lil boy), and i am happy to annouce that she has "FINALLY FOUND HER REASON" .

SHE FINALLY FOUND HER REASON

I SEE HER STRUGGLING TO HOLD ON,

AND FIGHTING JUST TO MAINTAIN

HER FUTURE NO LONGER HERS

ALL SHE DOES NOW; IS IN HIS NAME
 

THIS TINY SEED;

GROWING IN HER WOMB

NOW HER LINK TO A BETTER FUTURE

NO LONGER HEADED TO HER TOMB

 

DARK DAYS OF HER PAST

TRY TO CHASE HER IN HER DREAMS

BUT SHE HOLDS TIGHT TO A BETTER FUTURE

NEW HOPES AND BETTER DAYS

 

SHE HAS FOUGHT FOR MANY YEARS

TO GET THIS MONKEY OFF HER BACK

SO MANY MISTAKES MADE ALONG THE WAY

BUT NOW SHE LOOKS FORWARD

NO LONGER LOOKING BACK

 

IT’S A DAILY BATTLE JUST TO KEEP MOVING

TO GET UP AND FACE EVERY DAY

BUT NOW I SEE JOY IN HER EYES; NO LONGER DAZED AND PAINED,

EVERY TIME SHE SPEAKS OF HIM, OR SAYS HIS NAME

 

I AM SO PROUD OF HER MY BABY GIRL

AND I PRAY SHE KNOWS; SHE IS NOT ALONE

FOR ALL ALONG I HAVE BEEN THERE PRAYING

PRAYING WITH ALL I AM

THAT MY FATHER WOULDN’T CALL HER HOME

 

DEMONS MAY SEEK TO DESTROY HER

TEAR HER DOWN AND CLAIM HER SOUL

BUT NOT TODAY, NOR TOMORROW

FOR SHE IS FINALLY FOUND HER REASON

FOR HOLDING ON; HER REASON FOR STAYING STRONG

 

SO FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO ARE FIGHTING

FIGHTING JUST TO MAINTAIN

IF YOU CAN’T LOVE YOUR SELF ENOGH TO FIGHT

THEN I PRAY YOU HAVE SOMEONE FIGHTING IN YOUR NAME

 

BECAUSE BATTLES WILL ALWAYS BE THERE

THEY WILL COME AND GO EVERY DAY

BUT IF YOU HOLD ON AND PRAY IN FAITH BELEIVING

OUR FATHER ABOVE WILL HELP YOU MAINTAIN!       Bree 1.15.2013

 

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slimgoodwoody commented on SHE FINALLY FOUND HER REASON

01-16-2013

Great heartfelt poem Bree!! Glad to be able to read something new from you!

BreeLove

01/16/2013

Hey Sweetness- thank you. yeah i had writers block for a minute, dealing with many changes, but i am back on track, and hopefully i will be able to get some of it out my head and on to paper. miss u- Bree xo

phatdaddee

01/18/2013

You make sure you take care of home first and everything else will fall into place. Keep writing through it all!

VirtuousVal0812 commented on SHE FINALLY FOUND HER REASON

01-15-2013

Yes, I felt the pain and the love in this poem! I love it!

BreeLove

01/16/2013

Thank You for taking the time to read and comment :)

mylover21 commented on SHE FINALLY FOUND HER REASON

01-15-2013

omg love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BreeLove

01/16/2013

Thank You

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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