She Said

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She Said

She said that she’d love me forever
but I gave up too soon.
She said that she’d take my pain away
but I couldn’t make myself stay.
She said that everything would be alright
but I disappeared into the night.
She said that she’d wait for me
but I was too late.
And now I say, “I’m sorry.”
As if my words have meaning.

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Shelby commented on She Said

11-23-2009

This is lovely. Simple,yet it gets the message through perfectly. That is all I can say, other than 'story of my life....'.

reyjamiei

11/26/2009

Thank you Shelby...

nmedina commented on She Said

11-21-2009

Short but the message is perfectly clear. Sorry means nothing when when a heart is hurting. Good poem.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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