She's a Vampire

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    Just some lyrics I threw together to make a quick song.

    She's a Vampire

     

     

    She's a Vampire

     

     

    She wakes up

    In her usual mood

    The thought of him

    Is her usual food

     

     

    She loves the night

    That's when day begins

    She'll lure your heart

    With that devilish grin

     

     

    (Chorus): She's a Vampire

    A Vampire

    She's a Vampire

     

     

    Her waiting for you

    Has been long enough

    She'll show you leg

    And she'll like it rough

     

     

    You think you've won

    Things seem alright

    That's when she sucks the love

    Right out of your life

     

     

    (Chorus): She's a Vampire

    A Vampire

    She's a Vampire

     

     

    (Instrumental)

     

     

     

    (Chorus): She's a Vampire

    A Vampire

    She's a Vampire

     

     

    It's too late to run

    You've earned what you've done

    You followed desire

    And You found, a Vampire!

     

     

    (Chorus): She's a Vampire

    A Vampire

    She's a Vampire

     

     

     

    (Background Keywords: Immortal, Night, Danger, Blood, Forgiven)

    (Tested for 130 Beats Per Minute - 130 bpm)

     

     

    - EinStud in the Song Makers Club, KiddNation

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    MindNumbing commented on She's a Vampire

    02-18-2010

    Found myself singing this one... it has such a fluid feel to it. Great job!
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    WordSlinger commented on She's a Vampire

    02-18-2010

    I like this alot, makes me wanto watch, an interview with a Vampire, and Dracula, Stokers, nice, ty WS
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    jiminyCRITiX commented on She's a Vampire

    02-12-2010

    This poem is a winner! I would love to hear it as a song.
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    EinStud

    02/15/2010

    Thanks! I'm switching to Symphony and Piano music, though. It may be a while before I make songs again (takes too much time).

    stellar commented on She's a Vampire

    01-20-2010

    Totally love this poem..absolutely love the undertone..if u have time, pls read flesh huntress...that is kind of raw and ancient though,,,I love this song,,i like the humor ^_^ v
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    EinStud

    01/21/2010

    I will do that now, read "flesh hunter".

    EinStud commented on She's a Vampire

    01-08-2010

    Thanks for the comment cousinsoren. The poem is open for correction and any changes anyone wants to make to it. I feel that 2 minds, 3 minds, or 1000 minds can certainly be better than that of 1 mind. Besides, I am limited to my own creativity, unless I choose to share and exchange thoughts and ideas of others. Peace Out, EinStud .
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