Shit! hold on!


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    Shit! hold on!

                                   Theres darkness all around me
                         lit by the moon of light..scared to look around me
                         the fear of whats not right. howling in the distance
                         chills that run through my spine. There is no where to
                         run to, its dark to hide! Creeepyness all around me
                         rattlings of the trees. 

                         Foot steps getting closer. Growling in the air! 
                         My heart is beating faster. I'm afraid to run you see
                         What is stocking me in the woods is not a friend to me!
                         Every step that i make lets them know that I am there 
                         What do I do? Where do I go? Oh Lord help me please!

                         Sweat starts to run down my face. I am to afraid to run
                         and hide. Steps are getting closer. Mother nature is 
                         calling me! Shit hold on! I must be strong!

                         My smell is in the air.  Its dance! lets take that chance
                         and grab a stick to fight what has been stocking me. 

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    lunamarie commented on Shit! hold on!


    Dear Tony, shit ... this sounds like a guy I know ... haha ... haha ... I love this ... ha! ... Luna



    Oh shit is what chucky said on line and i was thinking good idea for a poem! Thank you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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