Shock

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    Shock
    Partial Door
    The home I grew up in
    As far as I could remember

    My parents room
    Dark... Waking in the middle of the night...
    Frighten of a nightmare
    3am...

    Hearing... Wondering...
    Curiosity...
    My Parents...

    The Noise
    Savage... primal... Wild Kingdom...
    I think?

    Turning on the light
    Seeing... What I did not want to see
    Two legs... V shaped

    My fathers butt...
    In between my mother Leggs?

    Frighten... Shocked...
    Veil lifting

    Realizing...
    One thing

    My Parents are human.
    That is how I was made.
    One Morning
    3am.

    Shocking...
    The True...
    In Plainview...

    Shocking...

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    Kr1ssy1 commented on Shock

    02-12-2009

    This poem has many emotions depending on the point of view one takes; as an adult reading it’s humorously embarrassing, as a child feeling is horrifically shocking. Great use of description.
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    bforibus commented on Shock

    02-05-2009

    very nice exposure of a child's mind. completed iniation . welcome to dps
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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