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    best read after 'the play ends'. this poem is short and is a combilation of many things. don't take it literally.

    shooting

     If you blame me one more time i will take this gun and shoot you.
    If you think this is a metaphor then i will have to say i warned you.
    If you believe that i can be used for games of the heart,
    then i must inform, you my thinking is very dark.
    Negative and positive are all relative in my mind,
    You are positive that i won't shoot and i negatively accept that you are alive.

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    kelzclusive commented on shooting

    09-15-2009

    wow. u sure can play arnd with words sistah. nice piece.
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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