• Lost Love

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    best read after 'the play ends'. this poem is short and is a combilation of many things. don't take it literally.


    If you blame me one more time i will take this gun and shoot you.
    If you think this is a metaphor then i will have to say i warned you.
    If you believe that i can be used for games of the heart,
    then i must inform, you my thinking is very dark.
    Negative and positive are all relative in my mind,
    You are positive that i won't shoot and i negatively accept that you are alive.

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    kelzclusive commented on shooting


    wow. u sure can play arnd with words sistah. nice piece.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    biolov’s Poems (17)

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    Who says I don't love you? 0
    new student to old 1
    The obsession is over 1
    shooting 2
    the play ends 2
    My forever friend 2
    my brave brother 2
    I wish I were new 0
    i love your phone 0
    never change 0
    our secret 0
    the way to my heart 0
    your touch 1
    mr wonderful 0
    your picture 0
    always beside you 0
    i wish to kiss you 1