Shore Scarce Known

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This piece has been salvaged from Poetry Survivor1, from Davey Jones Locker, so to speak. It has a face lift from what was posted: fonts, format and punctuation. It didn't fare well, and I can't blame it on the weather. Hope it's worth your time to possibly enjoy.

Shore Scarce Known

Hear the whisper of waters:

Upon my dark shallows, glide
Buoyant, near coastline confide
 

Shore scarce known, calls swift ships names

Rocks well cloaked, offer no spray

Surging foamed swells speak tides’ gain

Vessel by the mariners mind trained
 

In ill-perceptions, huddled mineral mass

Forbids, unwary, that none should pass

Save wisdoms soundings, charting depths

Left trespassers’ ignorance plunge into death

 

A graveyard of weary and hard of skin

Answered shout from the shoreline, “come in

And away from the long tended deep,

I have your desires in the hold of my keep” 

Upon my dark shallows, glide
Buoyant, near coastline confide 

Dare one drop anchor in swirled-green pools

Where white water rises on rocks under fools

The blindness is minds’ stress and powerful dreams

As reason takes a plank walk, and port bow screams

 

A weigh with the anchor, great gash to the bow

It’s too late with flood gates open just now

Waters come rising, sure as night falls

The ship lists, men raise fists

Drown by twilight; they hear coasts’ call,

Upon my dark shallows, glide
Buoyant, near coastline confide

“Are you come to be filled by thoughts in your head

To fare in the bounty of which I have said,

Come into sweet water, my hold you will reap

And stay in the shallows, away from the deep.”

 

“So, staying you are, and that by my locks

The dangers of shallows are hidden rocks

Be now acquainted with reefs built of brave

Dead dreamt before you, with none to save.” 

Upon my dark shallows, glide
Buoyant, near coastline confide 

In years to the latter, a tall ship draws near

Hears the beckoning,  shore scarce known

The crux of the matter, do not hearken, 

The well cloaked rocks are waiting locks

As heart’s vain dream is a spell bemoaned

 

The shore scarce known isn’t by name

(Though some say Death Shallows

And others, Reef Grave)

 

The beautiful lie is the skin of the truth

As the toll exacted is in aged and youth

Best you be wary, should shore call one’s name

The wishers and the weary to the end of life’s game

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Bettysrainbow48 commented on Shore Scarce Known

01-14-2010

Your work is so good. It is very interesting. I went through a flood once. I should write a poem on this site about it. Great Job. Good write.

Marsink

01/14/2010

Thanks, Betty. You've read the unsurvivor's poem. There are great poets still surviving over on the PoetrySurvivor1 page.

koolmom0 commented on Shore Scarce Known

01-14-2010

This is awesome Marsink, it really caught my attention. Kool

Marsink

01/14/2010

Thanks, Kool. I accept all compliments tendered, encouraging and kind. Much appreciation for your awaited visit!

Aria commented on Shore Scarce Known

01-12-2010

Marsink this poem was simply too deep (in thought, not in water) for the average reader. Now that you’ve explained it to me, simple that I am, I get it! Excellent write. You are a poet and a scholar!

Marsink

01/13/2010

Definitely, not a scholar. Saw my HS transcripts today and I graduated 253 out of 328 (not good). I admit, that if I want to learn to explain something I'd better make an effort to survey the topic. (I try to share what I learn). Thanks for reading and commenting. I do really appreciate your frienship.

Artie commented on Shore Scarce Known

01-12-2010

The whole time I read this, I related this to women. I met a few of those shores scarcely known. They look so inviting and tempting, just waiting for the fools to get thrashed by the rocks! Only the rare few make it through - that's my take - an absolute 10 from me

Marsink

01/12/2010

Artie! Good to know that you're still comin around this side of town. Thanks for the read, it's just what I need!

Grito commented on Shore Scarce Known

01-11-2010

The time had come, the pirates ring, the sea that of us does to sting.

Marsink

01/11/2010

It's a good thing, of this sea you sing.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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