Should I....

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    Should I....

    Should I....
     
    Should I take a chance....
    On everything,even loss it all....
    Or pretend I'll be just fine....
    Even though I already know....
    Too long on the edge...
    It's so easy to fall....
    I know only to well....
    It's only just a dream....
    A dream that your mine....
    We can't live forever....
    So many times I've heard it said....
    Such a deep insight....
    That was made there....
    To have been so clever....
    To have been so aware....
    Still,I dream that your mine.....
    Should I thake a chance.....
    Some how maybe somwhere....
    Out there waiting to see......
    Should I be the one....
    In all of this time....
    You've been dreaming of me.....         By Bryan/Copyrite

     

     

     

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    sincere commented on Should I....

    06-01-2009

    Fantasy! My favorite reads are mostly fantasy because i find myself fantasizing quite a bit. Love this one!
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    SilverGirl commented on Should I....

    05-31-2009

    Very sweet sentiment. Wow, are you ever the romantic heart.. truly a pleasure to feel your words in my heart.. I can so relate to you.. Silver Girl
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    Kukia

    05/31/2009

    I feel blessed that one would read all works I;ve oosred ,domoo hun

    FUBAR93 commented on Should I....

    05-29-2009

    This was a really cool poem. I think it's very personal, and the format fits the poem well.--FUBAR93
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    Kukia

    05/29/2009

    TY Fubar93,that's very generiouse.An excersise in what maybe some of us have contimplated.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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