Show me the Ocean

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Inspirational

    Show me the Ocean
    I propose we sit and gaze at a distante sun, enjoy the ray's
    of light. No longer hurting from past pains, but relieshing in the joy of
    living life. With a burning fire fueld by a desire to inspire and leave a
    constant impression; not just a memory.
    Show Me The Ocean !

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Orchid commented on Show me the Ocean

    05-29-2009

    Ahhhh very nice, right up my alley. Another awe inspiring poem. And boy is it hot outside. I am truely inspired to for a swim. Your good.
    Reply to Comment

    mcstrasphalis

    05/31/2009

    thank you for time and consideration

    StandingBear commented on Show me the Ocean

    05-29-2009

    Brief yet yielding to the promising ocean view. "No longer hurting from past pains" ________ Great write, 9
    Reply to Comment

    mcstrasphalis

    05/31/2009

    yo keep up the good work dad and i'll do the same thanks

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    mcstrasphalis’s Poems (9)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    With In 1 06/27/2009
    verbal-lingui
    stic    		 1 06/23/2009
    Ms. Lady 2 06/08/2009
    Been A Long Time 0 06/01/2009
    Born 0 05/31/2009
    Really Love 1 07/02/2009
    All The Way Around 1 07/02/2009
    morning sun 1 07/02/2009
    Show me the Ocean 3 05/26/2009
    Top of Page