Shutting You out

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Shutting You out

I'm shutting you out
For I can't keep you in
A festering sore
An unforgivable sin

I'm shutting you out
My heart is locked tight
Blackened by lies
Unmentionable fright

I've shut you out
I won't let you back in
Bothering me more
Getting under my skin
This festering sore
This unforgivable sin
Won't happen again
For I...
I won't let you back in

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NitaBoo commented on Shutting You out

01-11-2011

Pretty good...I like the flow and consistency in attitude...

dahlusion commented on Shutting You out

10-28-2010

Nothing like both barrels from the hip, a straight-shooter with powerful diction and delivery. Bravo!! Peace and Light, dah

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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