Sick Feeling

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    Sick Feeling

    The empty feeling has returned,
    And I don't know why,
    The breeze washes through my hollow chest,
    The storm is arising,
    It's going to be bad,
    I can feel it,
    And as sad as it to say it,
    I think I'm falling part at the seams again and I'm not sure why,
    The sick feeling I used to have so long ago is returning,
    And I can't stop it till its almost too late.
    I'm tired of hurting my family,
    There pain is my pain,
    And it seeps into me like snakes poison.
    What do I do?
    I don't think anyone can help me.

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    frazel5 commented on Sick Feeling

    10-24-2009

    Wow I know exactly how you feel girl. And just to say...God can help...he helped me overcome some crazy stuff. Just keep goin girl...u'll get thru!

    frog commented on Sick Feeling

    09-12-2009

    I have felt this way before, but don't worry...there are 6.2 billion people on the planet. Someone can help. Just keep seeking.

    ofonime commented on Sick Feeling

    08-24-2009

    This poem is so emotional, it conveys the real feeling of the writer. i like it.

    SmileyAngel138 commented on Sick Feeling

    08-07-2009

    this was dark and i could feel your emotion...great job :-)

    Helios commented on Sick Feeling

    08-04-2009

    A true poet knows how to deal with his/her problem, and that is through verses. That is what you have done here, and I praises your works. If you can, please give me your opinion of my "Italian Sonnet I" and continue to write: you are a true poet...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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