Silence, Emptiness, and Confusion

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Silence, Emptiness, and Confusion

Silence builds an awful wreckage of a girl
It feeds on loneliness and creates a void
Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture
A teenager is stricken and destroyed

There is no sound of laughter or happiness here
The little one has thrown in the towel today
Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
It is futile to hope and dream and pray

Emptiness builds a home in this woman
In this girl, this child where hollows have bred
A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes
And eats away at every connecting thread

Confusion feeds like a savage inside her,
Leaving nothing considered worthy remains
Destined to walk through life less ordinary
Alone, exiled, different, and disdained.

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Rhaven commented on Silence, Emptiness, and Confusion

07-06-2009

Wow, this is incredible. It's truly amazing.......

angel2380

07/07/2009

thank you

trocka7 commented on Silence, Emptiness, and Confusion

06-16-2009

Dear sweet Angel, you have a gift...I really connect with your writing and I also do hope that you have some happiness in your life, I understand needing an outlet though....keep on writing, keep on shining like your stars...:)

organicchick commented on Silence, Emptiness, and Confusion

04-22-2009

As i compliment your writing skills i do hope your life isn't as dismal as the mood in your poems. If it is, use your sorrow for strength...keep sharing your poetry. You are connecting with hundreds of others that may have been where you are in your life!!!!!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

angel2380’s Poems (21)

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