Silence

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Life

    Poem Commentary

    Heavy subject. Can't talk about it.

    Silence

    Haunted by my grief forever.
    And I can't let it go.
    Just hard to walk away sometimes
    from things I'll never know.

    Behind a mask of smiles it pleads.
    Please just let me out.
    But like a mime, I'm lost for words.
    I just cant say what it's about.

    My garden's Greek to all that's not.
     Teardrops make the rain.
    Secrets buried long ago,
    now loom as trees of pain. 

    Forbidden fruit, my tree of life.
    In the center of it all.
    With branches up and out of reach.
    Above the rest you stand so tall.

    But that's forbidden. The only hope.
    When everything is grey.
    And silence, well that's all there is.
    When there's nothing I can say.

                                                By Keith L. Smith 

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    LeslieMay commented on Silence

    10-09-2011

    This is an amazing poem. Sometimes silence says it all.

    Chaos128 commented on Silence

    10-28-2010

    I can feel the conflict. Wounds kept deep down inside tend to fester rather than get better, and eventually turn into something worse than the original injury. You've expressed the feeling well.

    KLS

    10/29/2010

    Don't you know it. And thanks for reading.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    KLS’s Poems (53)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Devils Mistress 0
    Angels Experiment 0
    I'm The Dad!!!! 0
    Dragon Slayer 1
    Poor You 1
    Stardust 0
    To The Clowns!!! 1
    Impact 0
    Societies Whore 1
    Come on Christmas!!!!
    !!!!
    0
    Silence 2
    Laugh on 0
    Fast Train 0
    Ageless shelter 0
    One night stand 1
    You Lived! 1
    One Day! 1
    My Picasso 2
    Happy life! 1
    The Boston Strangler!!!!
    !
    1
    The Meadow 1
    Chains of the Unknown 0
    Young Fun 1
    The bad boy! 1
    In Your Mind 1
    I'm You! 0
    Cooter Doctor 1
    Her aching Heart 1
    Fast lived 0
    The Damsel 1
    Maui & Me! 1
    My Dragon Kin! 2
    The Dark Angel 2
    Summer Girls 1
    All things new 1
    Toilet Paper 1
    When Love Was New! 2
    Me or Madness 1
    The Meany Clown 2
    Unity 2
    The Lost 0
    Hell 0
    The realm of unborn souls 0
    Ruthless 0
    The Spider 0
    Waging War 1
    Dream Of The Devil 0
    Misty 0
    His girl My girl 0
    The Search 0
    If Walls Could Talk 0
    Tough Love Angel 0
    Death Angel 0