Silent Cancer In A Little Girls Shoes

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    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    No i do not have SILENT CANCER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I saw this little blond girl with blue and brown eyes. She was small. She had a growing disorder and she was gonna die. I wrote a poem to her as if i were her. Thats what a discripitive writer does. Be someone elses shoes and become them in one poem... thats what some things u could do in poems like this..............

    Silent Cancer In A Little Girls Shoes

     My heart turns around
    My knees wobble

    .........I faint....... right where i stand........

    My feet r no longer visble
    My ending to my shin would fall to the floor

    .........I feel reched pain...........

    When someone dies
    There pain is brought to me

    .........magically...........

    When someone crys
    I bleed salt water tears and my tears are my blodd

    ...........fainted tears are now stained blood............

    people hear a song that they like
    But do they understand?

    ................there stupidity belongs to my brain.............

    If someone is hurt
    I'm hurt 10 times worse

    .................even though I feel bad for them.............

    If i was hurt
    Everyone would have my pain........

    .................2 months ago..........i found out that i had..................



    .................................Cancer......................................

    I'm gonna die in 10 months.............
    I'm sorry...........Silent................Cancer

    I'm sorry my friends
    I'm sorry to everyone, eecpt my family, You treated me like shit.........

    Dying at a younge age is horrible
    I feel terrible

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    pocketofdreams6 commented on Silent Cancer In A Little Girls Shoes

    09-27-2009

    Wow this is a very intense poem.... Are you really dying of cancer, or did you just put yourself in that perspective???? You had some incorrect spellings but other than that I liked it quite a bit, very intense!
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    alexan

    09/27/2009

    perspective.thank u! i have to work on my vobcabulary more.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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