Silent Prayer

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    Silent Prayer

    I heard you crying for me last night
    around the corner from where i sat.

    but i stayed silent

    I heard you pray that i would someday feel the same way.
    and that loving me was a pain you felt honored to bare

    Even if i didn't notice or care

    I heard you asking god to make away
    that we could just pass

    like strangers in the wind
    just so you could breath me

    I was silent

    then i started to weep
    please don't let him hurt
    give me strength to close that door

    I don't want to bare him this pain anymore
    give him a love
    that will be willing to open that door
    a feeling so deep
    it burns
    of pure pleasure
    not one that suffers

    Love can make or break you depending on how much you find it to be worth.
    its value has no set price
    but its a high one to pay

    I heard you ask for our sunny skies
    but what happens when they are cloudy and grey?

    Can you stand the rain?
    when its a shower or a pour.

    what will you do if you cant hold on to me anymore?

    I heard you say that you would climb any mountain
    but what if its only a steep hill

    can you tell me how does it feel?

    I don't think you are so ready
    but maybe some day you will be
    and maybe then i will be free

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    Bonofied commented on Silent Prayer

    03-24-2009

    speechless

    charliewang commented on Silent Prayer

    03-24-2009

    nice... enjoyed

    littleonyx commented on Silent Prayer

    03-23-2009

    Beautiful!!

    Bethane1978 commented on Silent Prayer

    03-22-2009

    Excellent

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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