Simple flames

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    • christianprep
    • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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    This could be anyone i wrote it because i am having trouble myself
    and i was thinking why am i questioning when i should not be? so i wrote this to clear my thoughts it just turned out this way help me make it a better poem?

    Simple flames

    She burst with flame

    High with faith

    Joyest ones of them all

    Yet it dies to a low roar

    Yet it seems to all fade away

    Is her heart deceiving her again?

    Or is it her?

    Is it this confused heart?

    With no meaning

    The flame has gone from her eyes

    Now she lies in the dark

    With meaning less

    Existence

    Wondering why she left his side

    And she knows she’s falling

    She chooses to fall

    For the ones that she lost

    Someone’s got to tell her it’s was there time to go,

    Not to be sad,

    And,

    Not to walk from God

    God save there soul’s before its to late?

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    winterkou commented on Simple flames

    10-20-2010

    awesome. you try to stay on the path of the righteous , seeking his glory.
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    christianprep

    10/27/2010

    Most definitly I may fall short sometimes but that does not mean i am giving up my God. i know he has died for me..... and i know questioning is wrong... so i let it out through this.. while i ask God to take my doutes away. why i ask myself why am i feeling this way its to get me on the right track in my mind so i am hole with God... Thanks for commenting on my poems

    Marsink commented on Simple flames

    03-28-2010

    You have a burden to see the lost come to know Him. It is so apparent by the themes of your poetry. I can always be thankful for those who share the love of Christ with those in darkness. The really sad aspect of the darkness is that those who walk in it, are blind enough to think it is enlightening and the status quo of life. Thanks for sharing your heart!
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    christianprep

    10/27/2010

    It helps me stay on the path i am suppose to if i just let it out in a poem.... i was more questioning why i felt that way than anything and asking God for his Help his guidence.... thanks

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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