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  • Erotic
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  • Passion

    Sin

    The taste of sweat.
    The taste of tears.
    Full of satisfaction,empty of fears.
    A simple addiction that feels so right.
    A wonderful sensation that can last all night.
    Your fingers tangled in my hair,my face pressed to your chest,
    as i gripp a body only the good lord could have blessed.
    Breathing gets harder as we try to win, in a room filled with the smell of sin.
    We wonder what we are doing and we wonder why?
    We know we can stop but we never try.

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Sin

    12-04-2009

    Whoa yeah does this bring back memories,, good write, good talent.

    Kukia commented on Sin

    12-04-2009

    Scarey how it reminds me of certain times over in Afganistan but,I realy liked this!,the read was awwsome!

    AshRenee commented on Sin

    10-16-2009

    Oooh, I love this. A recognition of. . . . wrongness, but still a passion to keep it going. A very good write

    dumplin commented on Sin

    10-16-2009

    I wouldn't stop either, girl! spelled grip wrong, but other than that, I liked it. Wish it was a little longer, though. Good job.

    MOMofTWINS commented on Sin

    10-16-2009

    Amazing Tina!!! I like thats its erotic, sexy and passionate with out being sleezy or trashy in any way.... Wonderfully done, honey!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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