Sir Knight.

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Good bye prince charming, hello Ogre.

Sir Knight.

I love you prince charming
but shriek is so much better
I don't want to leave you
but just don't see forever.

I can't bear the sight
of the tears in your eye
but I fear my darling
that its time to say goodbye

you are a prince, and a man worth my love
and you are to me so truely a blessing from above
thats why it pains me to even think it so
but the fairytale is ending, and I fear its time to grow

no more childhood fantasies
oh please do not cry
I never meant to hurt you
or send you this goodbye

I pray that we could yet be friends
but I understand if not.
I have to take this chance
its the only one I've got

I don't want to leave you
but this love's just not true
and so I must cut loose
before it is too late.

I will always love you, my darling prince charming
it was worth the while to see you smile and here you say you love me
but to stay, would only delay, what I fear is inevetable
so before we call it true love, before the date is set, I've got to cut it loose
I hope you understand. its not you its just me the emotions are mixed with in
and I pray to God, forgive me, if there should be any sin.
no more pretending, the magic ending, another claims my heart
but still I must wield the knife, and cut our tie apart.

 

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Sir Knight.

01-10-2011

I like the use of the prince and schrek to let the poor guy go, but to stay when you know it is not right that is the true sin. Letting go and moving on is the hardest thing to do especially when you are the one who has found someone new.

Tarlton009

01/21/2011

actually prince charming is the one who broke up with me. like I said I like Ogres better anyways

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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