Sister Sin

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I found this old poem in my Evil Archives ... I never liked how it flowed - So I made some edits and deciced to post it. ..... If you are a fan of Evil/Dark Poetry - I hope you find this to your liking. :)

Sister Sin

The time has come ~

It’s the witching hour.

Wake up the demons,

In the Castle Tower.

The moon is full ~

Can you feel it’s power?

Sister Sin is here,

To conquer and devour.

~~~

On her Dragon’s back ~

She rides thru the ruins.

As the demons dance,

To chants of the Druids.

They worship and cheer ~

As Sister Sin appears.

Awakened from her sleep,

Of One-Thousand years.

~~~

She’s waited so long ~

For this unholy night.

To hear virgins screaming,

As they’re sacrificed.

To drink down their blood ~

So salty and sweet.

 Damning each of their souls,

Fulfilling Satan’s needs.

~~~

She’s the Dark Priestess ~

She’s Satan’s right hand.

The unholy ruler,

Of the folly of Man.

She’s evil personified ~

Satan’s kindred twin.

She’s the Queen of the Damned,

Satan’s Sister Sin!

~~~

                                                        KjK042510

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MootPoint commented on Sister Sin

05-24-2010

Bravo, Bravo! The harpies are screeching for more.

knight4696

05/26/2010

Thanks Moot!!! :) I'm so happy you enjoyed this tale my friend! :) Thank you for the accolades! :) Ken

Oblaidon commented on Sister Sin

05-20-2010

Wow, Ken! This was is really good. IMHO This is your best one yet. Easy 10.

knight4696

05/21/2010

Wow Oblaidon! I am humbled Pal! I wasn't even sure that I was going to rework and post this. I had thought about scrapping the whole thing at one point! I'm so happy I didn't. I am honored that you think it is one of my best and for the Easy10! I know how hard it is to get that from you! :) Much appreciated my friend! Ken

Madelynn commented on Sister Sin

05-20-2010

..Sweet as sweet can be- when of course, we're talkin' sisters, and satan, and sin..ect. lol, This is dark, and evil- but also, so rich in detail, and spelled out in perfect measure! I love this write! I feel like I'm up late watching one of those old 70s witch-occult movies(love those! old movies rock!) anyhoots- great, vibe, nice and twisted!- peace,Maddi

knight4696

05/21/2010

Hey Maddi! :) Thanks so much! I love the old school occult movies too! I remember one called Satan's School for Girls that I always loved and my all time favorite is Spellbinder! :) They are both a trip! lol! Thanks so much for the awesome comments! :) Ken

Madelynn

05/25/2010

Remember it??-I own it! Both on vhs/and dvd! LOL. Hey remember that one old Starsky and Hutch episode where they were kidnapped by a witch cult, and almost sacrificed!?!-lol, too funny.(love that '74 Ford Torino! damn that car was sweet)-that's really the only reason I stayed up on sat. nights to watch it!lol, well, that and LoveBoat/ Fantasy Island! lol.) *Maddi*

simoneaugustus commented on Sister Sin

05-11-2010

I think this chick works at the DMV... All kidding aside, this is an incredible piece of work and the ending was fantastic! The last stanza in particular blew me away!

knight4696

05/11/2010

Thanks Simone! :) I'm happy you like my darkside! I have many different styles, but I favor my dark poetry, so when someone else enjoys it, I really appreciate it! :) Thanks again my new friend! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite commented on Sister Sin

05-07-2010

Pretty heavy...Satan’s kindred twin. She’s the Queen of the Damned, It’s the witching hour. Wake up the damned....

knight4696

05/09/2010

Thanks again Blue! :) I'm so happy you appreciate my darkside. It can be a little intense for some. Thanks again for being such an avid reader and awesome friend! Much appreciated! :) Ken

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