Six Years Now

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    In Loving memory of my Daughter Nicky who died six years ago today we miss you so much rest in peace my love.

    Six Years Now

    Today six year ago
    I had two daughters
    And one son
    Six years later
    I have only one
    She died in my arms
    So suddenly
    They say Blood clots
    Why did this have to be
    It just seems like yesterday
    When I herd her voice
    And begged her to stay
    But it was not in her power
    God took her home
    That same hour
    Now I miss her more
    Than words can say
    Now I think back
    To that sad day
    It broke my heart
    I lost my self
    Deep inside I fell apart
    But I know I cant
    have her back
    For in gods house
    she must remain
    Until the day we meet again

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Six Years Now

    12-29-2010

    I am so sorry for your loss, I can't imagine losing one of my daughters. My ex loss his daughter and he is a lost soul without much emotion. It is a beautiful poem and very well written.
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    honeypot

    12/29/2010

    Thanks friend I am sorry for your ex but I have been lucky I have the lord to keep me together .Thanks for the read and kind comment

    FranzJ commented on Six Years Now

    12-29-2010

    having three daughters, I cannot imagain the pain in loosing one - sorry for your loss- please keep writing
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    honeypot

    12/29/2010

    Thanks for reading and your kind comment god bless

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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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