Skin

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    From my personal experiences I have learned that one of the hardest things about moving on is moving on... Even when you forgive someone it takes time still to heal completely. My best friend once broke my heart... And some days it feels like just yesterday he walked away... I have accepted the circumstances and bid my goodbyes. I hold no grudges and I pray that his life may be full and blessed and that he may have all the happiness that his heart and hands can hold... But on days like these when I miss him the most...I wish that I was apart of the journey...You can always keep the good memories and forgive the bad ones...Keep your distance, but be cordial to even a stranger... My love will never fade...And I am grateful to have known him at all...

    Skin

    What do you do when you really love someone?

    How do you react when someone has stolen your heart
    and your right to breathe?

    Where do I go when the wrong heart was home?

     When every song on the radio makes you think of the
    only person who owns a part of you?

    Can your heart be revived after death has stolen its life?

    I’m still on the donors list...

     so I may never know...

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    Chaos128 commented on Skin

    01-25-2011

    Ooh! Ooh! I know! I know! You make yourself into something even better: The one that the all the others wish loved them : )
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    blvdobd2009

    01/25/2011

    I can always rely on you to give me some wisdom when i need to hear it the most...wanna know a secret?...A few days when I initially got the inspiration to write this, I was so sad...but today I feel better, lighter, laughfier if that is a word lol Thank you!

    JKool4Ever commented on Skin

    01-25-2011

    This is a really good poem and you ask questions I feel many of us have asked a time or two. I like the flow of this piece and can feel the passion behind it.
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    blvdobd2009

    01/25/2011

    I really appreciate that I always love to get feedback... It is always so endearing to me and I really do grow because of it...I am always grateful...thank you!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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