Slap Me

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    This is a rewrite, some readers were having trouble reading the fonts I used in the original
    Poem of the same title............

    Slap Me

    Slap me, wake me up.
         I've dozed off once again.
              The world slips by my gaze,
                   As I lay here in a daze.

    Slap me, turn me around.
         Let me feel the pain, again,
              My eyes glazed over.
                   My head sunk in.
                        My world coming to an end.

    Slap me, shut my mouth.
         Before I let a slur come out.
              My evil ways I need to mend.
                   I just don't know where to begin.

    Slap me, oh friend of mine.
         Let my wisdom come and shine.
              I think so long, and so very hard.
                   I forget what I'm thinking on.

    Slap me, for I have sinned.
         Please just slap me once again.
              Awaken my shuttering soul.
                   Tell my guardian angel to.
                        Just slap me and bring me back.

    So if you see me.
         Standing looking blank.
              Slap me, please,
                   I need a whack................    


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    lovinsmind commented on Slap Me

    08-04-2009

    im so glad i finally got to read this and yes i was one of the ones that couldn't read the original version thank you dear i enjoyed it and understand we all need a good slap some times lol!

    lucky62

    08/10/2009

    glad you liked my little slap fest glad you liked it......

    purdylox commented on Slap Me

    08-01-2009

    oh I am so glad I got to read this thanks so much

    lucky62

    08/02/2009

    glad I fixed it today maybe it will confuse the contest judges and I might win 1..

    SilverGirl commented on Slap Me

    08-01-2009

    LOL This is great! I love it.. and I can hear it being sung whilst your strum that geetar of yours. Thanks for asking me to read. I am now smiling.. Hugs SG

    lucky62

    08/01/2009

    silver, lucky knew you likey this slap happy tale.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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