• JonTalbain
  • Didn't I tell you, what I believe... Did somebody say that....that love like that won't last? Didn't I give you all that I got to, give baby?


What is it that makes me hate you?
Why do I seek your destruction?
When did I realize you were a pestilence to me!
How did your face, which I seen as a friend to me
now becomes something that disgusts me?!
Where came this feeling, but why haven't I destroyed you yet?!
Who is this dickhead who decides to more an arrogant asshole than
once originally thought to be

Bite me, die... go to fucking hell
Slit your wrists and drown in your own blood, you miserable piece of shit!
Take a sugar frosted fuck from the end of...
Put the noose around your neck and jump
Kiss the goat under the tail and play russian roulette with a loaded pistol
You bastards never knew the hell you sent me through
None of you were true!
Yet the ones who are left will see the hell in store just yet
As long as God lives, so your lives be filled with as much pain as you wrought on me unjustly

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LadyLuck commented on Slash


WoW... Somebody made you mad but good job on the fantastic and Very descriptive poem. Me and my friend read it (she over my shoulder) she kinda laughed through all the insults bc shes demented. but nice job.

WordSlinger commented on Slash


Take a sugar frosted fuck from the end of... lol you just set a new trend, lol flakey fpeople must have pissed you off .. Most folks are afraid of poems with strength, but hey dont tred right? ty WS

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

JonTalbain’s Poems (75)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Carnality 0
For a Love I won't forget 1
Happily Ever After (Part 2) 1
Confessions of the soul 2
Perdition 3
Somebody Already Broke My Heart 3
The story untold 1
Drive Me Insane 2
So Tired 0
A Child's Hell 2
They Say... 0
You 0
Goodbye 1
Self Destruction 1
Asylum 0
The Coming Rainstorm (Pt.2) 1
Waking up inside 0
Tell me Which is You? 1
A Glimpse 1
Slash 2
Breezes 1
Silenced 2
The Emotional Runaway Train 1
Before you make the step… 3
Into the Wastelands 1
And So it Seems that... 3
Holding on tight 1
The Silence 1
The Warriors Ethos 1
The Coming Rainstorm 1
Whatever it may be 2
Suffering 4
Memories 3
Inevitable 2
My Truth 1
Whispers... 2
You know what to say 2
The Man that Was... 0
Who I am 5
This is how it works.... 1
Come 1
Shaken 1
When Love Truly Awakens 2
Transcending Love 3
Maybe its just... 1
A thought 0
the pain 1
really? 0
A lost soul 0
Remember me 1
Drowning 1
The darkness 0
??? 0
Calling for help 0
Empty 0
naptime 0
Slivers of shades 1
Only you are the life among the dead 0
A prayer 0
Moonlight 0
Armageddon 0
A Kiss 0
Drawn in 0
whispers 0
Am I wrong? 1
From the pen of a soldier... 1
For Once Upon a Time... 1
The Flame... 0
When all your wishes... 0
Dancing again... 1
unsure 1
You see today... 1
Whispering Voices 0
Addicted 1