slice these veighns to pour ur blood out

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    slice these veighns to pour ur blood out

    u make me sick
    u and ur ways
    as deadly as can be
    your the most toxic kind
    the effect u have on me is more then potent
    i want to erase u from my thoughts,
    poisoining my soul
    carving away at my love
    cruisader drifting by

    captive hearts can never lie
    stranger control me in your ways

    do i scream to u in pleasure
    could u ever get to know me

    baring my naked self
    i stand at your feet
    never have mercy on me
    pleading for my sanity

    tooken by your approach
    i slowly slice these veighns to your liking
    this is what satisfys u

    i want to pour my blood to u
    for her pain
    for your unsensitive ways

    drift by
    come back
    as u disapear again my friend

    this is your love for me
    my thoughts are distracted

    slowly turning the paIN back on u
    she calls u the donator

    u never were there and here i am to reasure u my love
    well im slicing my veighns open to get rid of your blood
    as u know as that word daughter

    i dont hate
    i just think of the whole thing as your illness killed u a long time ago
    these our my words to my so called blood

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    poetheart87 commented on slice these veighns to pour ur blood out

    11-18-2009

    Haunting, sad, pounding with feeling. I am so sorry for you to have met so much pain. Life is really kicking you down, huh? I just gotta say, keep getting up and keep moving on. I feel for you.

    WordSlinger commented on slice these veighns to pour ur blood out

    04-01-2009

    I like this line stranger control me in your ways I gave it a 9

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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