small whIspeRS

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  • EinStud
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We are living in a time of conflict and turmoil. While I never promote violence as a resolution, I surely find a need to report what I see happening. That is what I think (on the outside).

small whIspeRS


small whIspeRS


 

Everyone speaks, “NoWay!”

Slowly, solemnly, inside alone

A small fist emerges,

Small whispers, “Hooray!”

 

 

Small whispers seem,

Have a way to grow,

To be scene

 

 

Guard what you say, what you think

Cause we live in a time and place

Where the answer is, they yell, 

The clink!

 

 

-EinStud

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Artie commented on small whIspeRS

02-21-2010

I've never been in more trouble than when I sopke my mind. 10

EinStud

02/22/2010

Read my latest poem, "Another two kinds poem". It says the same thing you just said (in Haiku form). By the way, I never knew there was a genre of poetry called, "Two Kinds of People in this World" poetry!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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