smile pretty girl

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we walk through all types of situation good or bad no matter what always remember we ONLY walk through it

smile pretty girl

Smile pretty girl
I hate to see you blue
I'd sure make things better for you
but there little I can do.
Remember life's not a blow of cherries
for a lady soft and fine
just hold your head up high girl and leave whats past behind.
tomorrow will be better
your paying for it today
with all the qualities you've got
It's a cinch youll get a play.
I've run across some good ones
but none as fine as you
To stand proud lovely lady
your dreams will all come true.
take a walk in the sunshine
gaze a while at the stars
let your mind run peaceful and free
it could melt away them bars
we all have our own prison
our own time we have to do
just sit your worries a side
don't let the time do you.
Dont be unhappy Doll
don't wast your life that way
the smoke will clear in no time 
It'll be a brand new day.
You cant change the time Angel
there is no crystal ball
the good LORD set our destiny
and will answer when he calls.
So dont worry about tomorrow
worrying wont help one bit
just live your life your own way
and do what you see fit
so look here precious one I want  to see
you smile just one more time
but all I can do is ask you 
by this simple rhyme....

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Paradice21 commented on smile pretty girl

01-09-2010

What a way with words you Have! Beautifully expressed and Put!! Lovely Piece!!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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