Smile, You're in Love

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  • ShanneN
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Just a song i wrote... if it doesn't seem to fit, or rhyme, it does when it is sung to the appropriate tune ;)

Smile, You're in Love

My whole heart wants you, my whole heart needs you,
My whole everything craves YOU.

And i need you to know, you're the reason im so
happy to love, you help me to love YOU.

It's not just another silly love song,
i mean every word, so please sing along,
if you're in love and you need him to know,
You never ever ever will let him go

tell him,

my whole heart wants you, my whole heart needs you,
My whole everything craves YOU.

da da da da da da da, da da da da da da da
da da da da da da da, da da da da da da da

I love you to the furthest star and back again.
And when all goes wrong, I can smile again

because,

Everything i dreamed of, all I'll ever need,
step to your reflection, and you will see,
everything i wanted and perfectly it's you.

da da da da dada da, da da da da dada da.....

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bery commented on Smile, You're in Love

05-25-2012

wow, its a song as well as a poem i love it..thank you for sharing the warm feeling

winterkou commented on Smile, You're in Love

12-06-2010

Love is having two beautiful kids you adore everyday, that makes you think of what a blessing life is . check out my love poem." This Love is".Great write about love by the way

natertot commented on Smile, You're in Love

11-29-2010

I think I'm in love so i to will sing DA DA DA DA DA DA DA.................

angelchaser commented on Smile, You're in Love

11-21-2010

This is beautiful, Shannen. He's very lucky to have your love and I wish you all the best with him. *big hugs*

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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