Smile

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  • Happiness

    Smile

    You make me smile with your heart
    Without your laughter I'd fall apart

    The lines that shape the grin on your face
    Are the guides to the happiness I can't erase

    The way your porcelain teeth reflect the light
    Is the way your smile reflects a perfect sight

    I can find no other then the one your face deploys
    For there is no other smile in existence causing rejoice

    And as it fades I envy the day that holds that smile
    As I only ask for the memories that last for awhile.

    I may not need the expression in literal ways.
    But I cherish the emotions passing through like rays.

    Although as Powerful as your smile may be.
    The significance is Merely Meek

    Due to the pain your whole Soul...resolves
    For without you, my significant strength disolves

    Written by: Manuel Martinez
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    SEVEN commented on Smile

    06-04-2009

    Kudo points for u on this piece.....im feein this...I can see my gurl's smile as i read this....good job

    kaka17 commented on Smile

    05-29-2009

    WOW THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM. YOU ARE REALLY GOOD AT RHYMING. IM SUPRISED THAT YOU COULD DESCRIBE A SMILE BECAUSE I WOULDN'T KNOW WHERE TO BEGIN. YOU ARE VERY TALENTED AND I LOVE THIS POEM. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

    sjlove commented on Smile

    02-14-2009

    there are so many more words to say about a smile. =]

    beautifuldeath commented on Smile

    02-13-2009

    wonderfully writeen.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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