Smile

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Sammia and I wrote this the other night

Smile

I made you smile

I made you laugh

I made you cry

I made you live


You always seem to make

The world a brighter

Place to smile,laugh

cry and live

You made me smile

You made me laugh

You made me cry

You made me Live!

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lonewolf commented on Smile

02-04-2011

very nicely done by the 2 of you. i think you show a lot of promise in becoming a good poet. keep learning and writing. i know sammi will help you out.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

JadeDragon’s Poems (10)

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