Snake Invader

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  • FLAWLES
  • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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Thank you for choosing to read this;  but PLEASE read "One-Eyed-Snake" by lustfulsoul first.

Snake Invader

No longer diverting the pursuit of pleasure.  At last I’m gonna taste, the fruit of your treasure.
Without any hesitation I enter, piercing sharply, like a stiff splinter.
A warm welcome embraces, my one-eye-snake.  Slicing through the icing of your fresh-baked-cake.
It’s madness and ecstasy all rolled into one.
It’s blasphemy and love devouring your cum.
This member of the underworld, that’s sucked into your furnace.
Has all the intensity of lust in it’s earnest.
Lusting, basting, in the dark waters of your pool,
Managing the ragged breathing,  while I’m working this tool.
The coveted outcome, retreats, as I continue to creep
Punishing you for hours, not stopping till you’re sleep.
Without any remorse of guilt, you beg for release.
But there’s no way, at least right now, I’m exiting your crease.
Your inner walls now stripped raw, from this thing that’s stuck in your craw,
Has you pulsing and screaming for mercy, for rest, from this biggest thing, you ever saw.
Indefinite throbbing invading your sensitivity, spinning your head from all this energy.
Slurping sounds emitting from the mouth of the beast are heard.
You’re still begging me to stop;  but you can’t get out a single word.
At last, the constriction of the walls are running like molten lead.
From the boasting and pounding, of this one-eye-head.
The frightful movements all at rest, as it finally vomits lava into your treasure chest.
No longer diverting the pursuit of pleasure.  At last I’m gonna taste, the fruit of your treasure.
Without any hesitation I enter, piercing sharply, like a stiff splinter.
A warm welcome embraces, my one-eye-snake.  Slicing through the icing of your fresh-baked-cake.
It’s madness and ecstasy all rolled into one.
It’s blasphemy and love devouring your cum.
This member of the underworld, that’s sucked into your furnace.
Has all the intensity of lust in it’s earnest.
Lusting, basting, in the dark waters of your pool,
Managing the ragged breathing,  while I’m working this tool.
The coveted outcome, retreats, as I continue to creep
Punishing you for hours, not stopping till you’re sleep.
Without any remorse of guilt, you beg for release.
But there’s no way, at least right now, I’m exiting your crease.
Your inner walls now stripped raw, from this thing that’s stuck in your craw,
Has you pulsing and screaming for mercy, for rest, from this biggest thing, you ever saw.
Indefinite throbbing invading your sensitivity, spinning your head from all this energy.
Slurping sounds emitting from the mouth of the beast are heard.
You’re still begging me to stop;  but you can’t get out a single word.
At last, the constriction of the walls are running like molten lead.
From the boasting and pounding, of this one-eye-head.
The frightful movements all at rest, as it finally vomits lava into your treasure chest.

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phatdaddee commented on Snake Invader

03-11-2011

Good shit LE$! I really enjoyed the imagery you were able to deliver in this poem and it seems the ladies liked it too! That can't be bad! LOL!

FLAWLES

03/13/2011

Thank you for your kind words. I love writing poetry; although I get real enjoyment from the challenge of combining my verses into an existing poem and keeping the original theme intact.

poetrygal45 commented on Snake Invader

07-13-2009

WOW! I need a cold shower!!!! Got me excited......................

FLAWLES

07/13/2009

I apologize. I shouldn't start things I can't finish.

RyneishaB commented on Snake Invader

07-13-2009

OMG...man this is definitely my cup of tea i love it one again...got me all hott and bothered lol...Great Job:)

FLAWLES

07/13/2009

Hey thanx Neesh. You know I always aim to please; but tell me you read "One-Eyed-Snake" first. PLEASE.

jademelissa74 commented on Snake Invader

07-11-2009

LMAO! This is freaking awesome. You have such a way of seeing things. You have a way of creating powerful feedbacks by just a simple devoted minute of analyzing the work :)) Great job bud!

FLAWLES

07/11/2009

Well, lustfulsoul wanted my input, so I "put it in"

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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