SnapShots (First Reel)

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SnapShots (First Reel)

We never took pictures

but a hundred memories of you cloud my mind

snapshot one:

you and I walking on the beach laughing, loving

snapshot two:

being in the crook of your arm..with me sniffing you...i loved your pheromones!

snapshot three:

Hope Gardens. looking at birds and animals and you taking my hand and looking down from great heights you humming...

'Here Comes the Bride"

snapshot four:

you staring across a room at me with a knowing smile

snapshot five;

you making me comfortable before you took the only picture we ever took

snapshot six:

you taking care of me when I was sick

snapshot seven:

you seeing me in my sexy purple dress

snapshot eight:

Christmas morning.....candles aglow... breakfast in bed

snapshot nine:

the many times i turned to you at 1 o' clock in the morning

snapshot ten:

you washing my itty bitty underwear in your hands......man enough to take them off..man enough to help me wash...priceless

snapshot eleven:

21 st birthday.....when you carved your love in wood.....me stunned!

snapshot twelve:

catching you watching me sleep

snapshot thirteen:

kissing me goodbye....forehead, cheeks, nose-rub, kiss on the lips....maybe a slap on the ass...

snapshot fourteen:

both of us in the kitchen....cooking

snapshot fifteen:

you holding me as I cried.....telling 'us' goodbye.....

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MindNumbing commented on SnapShots (First Reel)

11-09-2010

The ending gave me chills and broke my heart a little. I love the simple feeling of reality throughout this, using everyday moments but making them monumental. Nicely done ~ 10

Bobbie876

11/09/2010

thank you makes me sad and breaks my heart too

FranzJ commented on SnapShots (First Reel)

11-09-2010

the snap shots are vivid and I can see you in all of them - sadly in the last picture - all good things must come to an end

Bobbie876

11/09/2010

:) so true thanks for commenting!

knight4696 commented on SnapShots (First Reel)

11-09-2010

Bobbie - Very creative .. a photo album of life and love .. Beautifully expressed images ... beautifully written! Great job! :) Ken

Bobbie876

11/09/2010

thank you :)

ApaqRasgirl commented on SnapShots (First Reel)

11-08-2010

oh I loved this one dear, so filled with passion and love, I could see all the events played out in each snapshot....well written dear.........love asha

Bobbie876

11/08/2010

thanks much :)

Rhymer commented on SnapShots (First Reel)

11-08-2010

I have to agree I love the snap shots of life. Intriguing and enjoyable read 10 from me.

Bobbie876

11/08/2010

love that you love it Rhymer!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Bobbie876’s Poems (19)

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Title Comments
Losing Myself 3
Numb 2
Kindred Spirits 1
Once upon a time 0
CathArsis 11
Paradise 12
SnapShots (First Reel) 7
WE CREATED GOD 6
MEN 9
NO APOLOGIES 11
'O' 9
TRAVELS 3
ENTHRALLED 3
FULL MOON 3
PUBLIC DISCLAIMER I 3
FIGHTING TEMPTATIONS 3
PUBLIC DISCLAIMER II 3
FORBIDDEN 5
VAMPIRE/ LIVING DEAD 6